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Apr. 24th, 2008
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Ok, guys, this is a little ridiculous; I have a poem that I performed last Saturday at Mood Swings, but it still has no title. Suggestions, please?
ETA: Ok, I've decided I like 'Southern Comfort' as the title.
( Southern Comfort )
ETA: I guess some further questions would be: how strong is the imagery? Does it show more than it tells? What would you think about breaking it into more stanzas? Would this make the poem look too cluttered?
And now I need to stop obsessing over this thing. It's just that an unfinished poem nags at me, and when it's missing something as integral as the title, well...
ETA: Ok, I've decided I like 'Southern Comfort' as the title.
( Southern Comfort )
ETA: I guess some further questions would be: how strong is the imagery? Does it show more than it tells? What would you think about breaking it into more stanzas? Would this make the poem look too cluttered?
And now I need to stop obsessing over this thing. It's just that an unfinished poem nags at me, and when it's missing something as integral as the title, well...
