I've been on an editing kick this week; found some of my old stuff from Parker's class, and made solid progress on two of the three (remember those days, Kaylie?), and I also made a few stylistic edits to Southern Comfort. I had fun trying to be as visual/sensual (using the senses, not sexual) as possible XD
( Southern Comfort v. 2.0 )
Did I succeed? Can you see/feel the poem better? Please let me know; I need something to break up my studying and 480 research (even if it does involve reading my favourite poet evar, WB Yeats, and researching the Irish independence movement).
( Southern Comfort v. 2.0 )
Did I succeed? Can you see/feel the poem better? Please let me know; I need something to break up my studying and 480 research (even if it does involve reading my favourite poet evar, WB Yeats, and researching the Irish independence movement).